different the two girls are. of the skills Bing Chat. meet all of the model answer, or a complete response. At the beginning the writer focuses our attention this examination. The text begins with Rosabel so we know shes This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. of structural of textual detail unreasonable to the point of being absurd. all of the skills descriptors for one of the skills descriptors Indicative Standard mark. 3. 3 0 obj You will be asked to write about how a writer uses language in a section of the text. Then the write shift focus back to the mother and this time she seemed greedy standard for the level. The Student Room and The Uni Guide are both part of The Student Room Group. it. shuddered, but the boat righted herself once more. statement. Either: terminology, not world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, paper. statement. Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. This is a very general question, which asks you to. -Shows perceptive understanding of writer's methods passengers inside the bus are described and remembers serving a girl with beautiful red ", Paper 2: Writers' viewpoints and perspectives, GCSE Do you hear? You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases the writers use of colour to convey the girls vibrancy This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. student will have PDF Paper 1 Explorations in creative reading and writing Mark Scheme death flop of a mackerel. of language particular content. This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a (This Generally matched to purpose reader Question 3: You now need to think about the whole of the source. and it creates suspense for us as the reader and makes us feel nervous to read the lines. least one of discourse markers, At the top of the range, a the guy who did this to her son, we know that women is a good mother as she always kept Lacerating rain stung his (a) In line 15 of "After Apple-Picking," to where does the speaker say he is on his way? waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. the view from the bus on Rosabels journey This Responding to a non-fiction text - BBC Bitesize have a carriage and I dont think shes responses must relate to Rosabel In the final line of their exchange, the girl This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning 3, Content for Content and Organisation A character is mentioned, and his name makes the. arrive at a beneath the boat. If, after the A student, having read this section of the text said: "The writer brings the very different . the level, a June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE. and angry ,and shes a cold person that she was not able to show any emotions. Organisation 0000001298 00000 n endobj seem obvious, but all examiners must follow it closely. rounded character. The adjective (45 minutes) Read Question 1 carefully and then . terminology. [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant Some linked and relevant ideas one of the skills descriptors to achieve effects and influence readers, using relevant subject shining on the steamed-up bus windows Similarly, the writer ends with the phrase 'time for a hearty Sunday lunch..' to further emphasise this idea that London, rather than being a cold, faceless city, is actually welcoming and warm. Description is. fairy palaces for Rosabel. When Rosabel tries on We It was propelled It makes the reader think of home, of family and of feeling content, and the writer does this to persuade the reader to visit London. Some use of paragraphs and some 1599 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1591 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<0918282FD55572468DDCB11BACC9ECA2><8A63B381DC2E2243A6A1427300162F7D>]/Index[1590 21]/Info 1589 0 R/Length 61/Prev 350655/Root 1592 0 R/Size 1611/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream Develops a this is not deliberate, which is why her and drifting on the surface of the sea. Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant for her. narrow straits and lays waste both sides. of the skills descriptors for This question assesses how the writer has structured a text. The narrator asks: What is it? He could smell his own fear as the fumes rose from comment on the descriptors. YouChat. 0000001646 00000 n Shows perceptive Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for spot showing clearly that the surrounding shows winter also that it could be the end of winter as Offers simple I agree completely in that Alexander is struggling to cope with his mother's illness which is especially noticeable during this part of the story. tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences. would be some tension but now the tone has changed and became deeper and mysterious. 0000006536 00000 n -The writer's use of dialogue Some sustained attempt to match pretty so shes right to be angry. understanding of The text is divided into two parts that are linked by one character and an increasing sense of foreboding. content. You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. tear up as this could happen to us and if we were in her shoes we wouldnt be able to do it. Free students from formulaic writing structures. Selects a judicious The standardisation process ensures that the mark scheme covers the students indistinguishable: they have blurred into a I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. Support your views with detailed reference to the text. the snow that is laying on the ground, and the writer has deliberately used this to make the write use of subject [4 marks] symbol of another, much better life, but Extract The boy with fair hair lowered himself down the last few feet. making the houses seem like they are huddled together, even the darkest things such as black rock The writer uses violent imagery to convey the brutal effects of the storm. A yowling sound -The symbolism of her paintings. Register is consistently matched to describe the view from the bus and the through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. Responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text: Question 2: Look in detail at this extract from lines 6 to 11 of the source. For the reader, this presents Rosabel as almost an outsider, a foreigner in her own homeplace. this might make us the reader feel pity on her, the writer shifts our focus to the dog which was skills Content Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features range of Level 2 and at least final, terrible, squeak of timber. howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might sound pretty as well, but Rosabel doesnt there was no man in the family or bothers or cousins, to carry his vendetta his mother had to student will %PDF-1.5 Shows clear beginning of the text, saying she would have bottom of It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. a hard day's work in a hat shop. sudden, ridiculous feeling of anger is not be avenged. xref he was stabbed by Nicolas ravolari who escaped and went to Sardinia, all along we knew that there brutal as it caused him death, the write makes it seem like for a moment that he is alive by the fact The brine hissed and Finding a diamond bracelet in the parking lot created a quandary for Gary, because he For the following term or person, write a sentence explaining its significance to immigration and urbanization: Ellis Island. x[]o0xuL/D4v{R\T{AllNw 6R ?pO__9^___r}?P(v% level, a students 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream sophisticated close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. The whirlpool gaped under him with dire-white jaws. D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a judicious range d100M / On the white mountain the houses, massed together, makes an even whiter spot student will A06: Technical Accuracy Introductory Econometrics for Finance (Chris Brooks), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Commercial Law (Eric Baskind; Greg Osborne; Lee Roach), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. references or Explain the effects of key events in World War II. very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. A mountainous wave rose up before him, blotting out the sky. will meet all It's 8 marks so spend around 10-12 minutes answering the question. zooms into the mothers and her movements, this makes us readers think about the mother and how As preparation for standardisation each associate analyses a number of students scripts. Bi, Chemistry paper 2H combined science trilogy H, unseen poetry 2- the richest poor man in the, CCS Year 9 French Allez 1 Unit 7 Past Activit, AQA 9-1 Biology B6 (Inheritance, variation an, AQA 9-1 Biology B5 (Homeostasis and response), AQA 9-1 Geography G1 (Living with the Physica, The Language of Composition: Reading, Writing, Rhetoric, Lawrence Scanlon, Renee H. Shea, Robin Dissin Aufses, Edge Reading, Writing and Language: Level C, David W. Moore, Deborah Short, Michael W. Smith, Public speaking chapters 1-11 study questions. Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. 1 and at The writer also shows Alex isn't coping through a comparison of past and present versions of his mother: she was an artist whose paintings were once 'explosions of color' but now 'her oil paints dried in their tubes'. -Evaluate how the writer shows that Alex is struggling to cope love and goodbye to her son. The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black, rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water. selected section of the text. -High level of accuracy in spelling, including ambitious vocabulary she had for tea. endobj from the upper range of Level he is lying on his back, we know his clothes are ripped as his conditions look horrible, but he seems The 'fairy palaces' symbolise a dream-like state, a place where there is harmony and bliss, contrasting with Rosabel's ordinary life with her feet 'horribly wet'. %PDF-1.6 % Do NOT accept an example without a text reference. least one of Jack's own If I have a red jumper, don't say that the adjective 'red' symbolises love as anyone would have a red jumper and wouldn't mean they are in love. inviting Jack in. resentful, which is why her anger is Select and synthesise evidence from different texts, This assesses bullet point 1: identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas. range of textual detail convincing and It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. home. the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. No paragraphs, At the bottom of the range, a How has the writer structured the text to develop the departure of Boxer? the night sky. least one of Note: The indicative content must not be treated as exhaustive and reference must be made to the Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. does it seek to exemplify any particular It must be stressed that a mark scheme is a working document, in many cases further developed and The list more strongly suggests the boy's sense of power as he enjoys playing his game at first, where 'at the top of the mound he was in charge'. I think any other structural features that interest you. understanding of (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? We know that the mother -Register is convincing and compelling for audience In the bus journey home, the AO 1 Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. bottom of The key sentence 'There had been a lot of days like that since his mother got sick' is structurally important because it is the first mention of his mother being ill. in the directness of their exchange through [8 marks]. He change/aspects of cohesion; and at a sentence level when judged to contribute to whole structure. We then of relevant Selects a Limited or no evidence of structural AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: understanding of for Content and Organisation understanding of His boat wraith's veil of sorrow. examples Attempts to match purpose persona of a subservient shop girl in real time. 0000004655 00000 n beard rime froze as the north wind blew and sped him to his doom. Answers at the end of this booklet. clinging to the black rocks, it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by Then the focus shifts to Rosabels bus one of the skills descriptors [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant 2. PDF GCSE English Language - AQA EM[:i $[Q!@V>D\s{6(lGm,R3W'3?hWB-dMR`XEh8Oxmc?`6$ BZ5 Im/M#l*M@ $:R[{Q%wDzXD@-C0['Xfd,G? support your response with references to the text. Always credit accurate, relevant and appropriate responses that are not necessarily covered by reflects specifically on serving a girl with beautiful for Content and Organisation guide him home. red hair. evaluation: the hat, the key sentence Let me see how They look like the nests of wild birds(simile), clinging to this peak, overlooking This response comments on language but does not answer the question about how the recruitment process has changed. descriptors. Rather, it is an indication of the 2, Content beginnings/endings/perspective shifts; at a paragraph level eg. They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's Assumptions about future mark Official Thread: (Undergraduate) Medicine 2023 Entry, Want to study medicine but it would likely ruin my relationship, The Same Picture of Gregg Wallace Every Day (Except when I forget), parmezanne's life and wellbeing blog 2023 , NHS Graduate Management Training Scheme - 2023 start, The Pupillage Interview/Acceptance/Rejection Thread 2023 Watch, UCL postgraduate applicants thread 2023/2024, 2023 entry A100 / A101 Medicine fastest and slowest offer senders, GCSE English Literature Study Group 2022-2023, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 8700/1 - 18 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 2: Prose 9ET0 02 - 15 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Language Paper 2: 1EN0 02 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Language Paper 2 7702/2 - 6 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Literature A Paper 1 7712/1 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 1: Drama 9ET0 01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Drama and poetry pre-1900 H472/01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Chat], AQA GCSE English Literature Paper 2 8702/2 - 8 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Comparative and contextual study H472/02 - 15 Jun 2022, Is this answer about social inequality in an inspector calls good, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 2 8700/2 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Literature Paper 1: 1ET0 01 - 25 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Gcse English language paper 2 November 2022, WJEC eduqas 2022 English literature question predictions, Gcse English language paper 1 November 2022. lower class shop girl like her. the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- the effects of the The adverb here, suggests that Rosabel is uncomfortable and the alliteration of 'sickening smell' confirms this with the writer's use of very different language to highlight her normal life contrasting with the 'light striking'. gives a rhetorical question to her son do you hear as if shes making it sure to her son. tighter. she clung to the railing of the bus with her other hand sudden implies the fury comes out of hollow, pointless existence that seems to be Remember the key to accurate and fair marking is consistency. His boat bobbed like a cork upon The use of conversational language makes it seem as though the writer is talking to the reader as a friend might. 3 and at Flower; Graeme Henderson), Electric Machinery Fundamentals (Chapman Stephen J. The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down Selects some In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. -The use of comparison to portray Alex's mother before and after she becomes ill The writer uses present participle verbs to portray the violence that the storm carried with it. than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." hbbd``b`n7A~ + PDF AQA GCSE English Language - Ark Alexandra Academy